Oh y a le critique encouraged Bon j'y vais alors (ce qui est déjà bon signe en soit paske je *critique* que les machins que j'aime beaucoup )
- Peut-être foncer un soupçon sa jambe droite. Comme tu as quand même des couleurs assez saturées, ça fait tout bizarre la jambe dans un brun rose. Et pis comme elle est pas si loin que ça, elle mériterait un peu plus de détails. Mais déjà si tu la fonces, je penses que tu récupéreras un peu de reliefs.
- Son bras droit un choüïa trop long. Le coude un peu moins loin. Le fait que tu fasses passer les cheveux par dessus l'épaule accentue encore plus cette effet.
- Et pour finir, la branche mériterait un peu plus de boulot au niveau des ombrages. Elle est un peu plate, du coup, sa "platitude" se repercute sur la demoiselle qui n'est pas plate (euh) mais qui le deveint un peu.
Mais malgrè tout ce que j'en dit, je suis fanne des couleurs lumineuses qui s'harmonisent bien. Et pis les partis pris de stylisation commence à bien le faire aussi ^___^
Et puis les textures. Comme d'hab' quoi
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